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For Lord Granville: consideration, that

it would be desirable to consult the Accountant of his Department, as well as Mr Rennie, the Auditor of the Colony, who appears to be in this country, before coming to a

final decision on the subject.

I am,

Your

obedient Servant

Lord Allemetlen(?)

13 Oct 1870

MINUTE PAPER.

Dr Lyon's

4.31/12

Ills. 27

The alterations which

R. MacDonnell has made appear to me to be decided improvements, and I am not aware of any reason why the amended form of Certificate should not be adopted.

You will see that the Secretary suggests that Mr Rennie's opinion on the subject should be noted.

JLL 8/1/70

WM 14/1

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For Lord Granville: consideration, that

it would be desirable to consult the Accountant of his Department, as well as Mr Rennie, the Auditor of the Colony, who appears to be in this country, before coming to a final decision on the subject.

I am,

Your obedient Servant

Lord Allemetlen

13 Oct 1870

MINUTE PAPER.

Dr Lyon's

4.31/12

Ills. 27

The alterations which R. MacDonnell has made appear to me to be decided improvements, and I am not aware of any reason why the amended form of Certificate should not be adopted.

You will see that the Secretary suggests that Mr Rennie's opinion on the subject should be noted.

JLL 8/1/70

WM 14/1

321

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For Lord Granville: consideration, that

I am,

Your obedient Servant

Lo Allemetlen
13 Oct 1870

MINUTE PAPER.

Dr Lyon's
4.31/12
Ills. 27

The alterations which R. MacDonnell has made appear to me to be decided improvements, and I am not aware of any reason why the amended form of Certificate should not be adopted.

You will see that the Secretary suggests that Mr Rennie's opinion on the subject should be noted.

JLL 8/1/70
WM 14/1
321

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For Lord Granville: consideration, that

I am,

Your obedient Servant

Lo Allemetlen
13 Oct 1870

MINUTE PAPER.

Dr Lyon's
4.31/12
Ills. 27

The alterations which R. MacDonnell has made appear to me to be decided improvements, and I am not aware of any reason why the amended form of Certificate should not be adopted.

You will see that the Secretary suggests that Mr Rennie's opinion on the subject should be noted.

JLL 8/1/70
WM 14/1
321

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For Lord Granville: consideration, that it would be desirable to consult the Accountant of his Department, as well as Mr Rennie, the Auditor of the Colony, who appears to be in this country, before coming to a final decision on the subject. I am, Your obedient Servant Lord Allemetlen(?) 13 Oct 1870 MINUTE PAPER. Dr Lyon's 4.31/12 Ills. 27 The alterations which R. MacDonnell has made appear to me to be decided improvements, and I am not aware of any reason why the amended form of Certificate should not be adopted. You will see that the Secretary suggests that Mr Rennie's opinion on the subject should be noted. JLL 8/1/70 WM 14/1 321 However, to follow the exact output format requested (HTML using for paragraphs), and correcting minor errors and formatting as per the instructions: For Lord Granville: consideration, that it would be desirable to consult the Accountant of his Department, as well as Mr Rennie, the Auditor of the Colony, who appears to be in this country, before coming to a final decision on the subject. I am, Your obedient Servant Lord Allemetlen 13 Oct 1870 MINUTE PAPER. Dr Lyon's 4.31/12 Ills. 27 The alterations which R. MacDonnell has made appear to me to be decided improvements, and I am not aware of any reason why the amended form of Certificate should not be adopted. You will see that the Secretary suggests that Mr Rennie's opinion on the subject should be noted. JLL 8/1/70 WM 14/1 321 Let's correct and simplify it according to the given rules and requested output format: For Lord Granville: consideration, that it would be desirable to consult the Accountant of his Department, as well as Mr Rennie, the Auditor of the Colony, who appears to be in this country, before coming to a final decision on the subject. I am, Your obedient Servant Lo Allemetlen13 Oct 1870 MINUTE PAPER. Dr Lyon's4.31/12Ills. 27 The alterations which R. MacDonnell has made appear to me to be decided improvements, and I am not aware of any reason why the amended form of Certificate should not be adopted. You will see that the Secretary suggests that Mr Rennie's opinion on the subject should be noted. JLL 8/1/70WM 14/1321 The final version, formatted as requested and with corrections: For Lord Granville: consideration, that it would be desirable to consult the Accountant of his Department, as well as Mr Rennie, the Auditor of the Colony, who appears to be in this country, before coming to a final decision on the subject. I am, Your obedient Servant Lo Allemetlen13 Oct 1870 MINUTE PAPER. Dr Lyon's4.31/12Ills. 27 The alterations which R. MacDonnell has made appear to me to be decided improvements, and I am not aware of any reason why the amended form of Certificate should not be adopted. You will see that the Secretary suggests that Mr Rennie's opinion on the subject should be noted. JLL 8/1/70WM 14/1321

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for dord Granville: consideration, that it would be desirable to consult the Accountant of his Department, as well as Nr Rennie, the Auditn of the Colony, who appears to be in : this country, before evning to a final decision on the subject. I am, Your obedient Servant Lo Allemetlen 1304 song lon MINUTE PAPER. Dr Zeur's 4.31/12 Ills. 27 The alterations which die 14304 R. Mac Dounsel has made appear tome to be decided improvements, and dam wote pware of any reason why the amoured form of Cotunate should not be adopted. You will are that the Fissary suggests that wh. Rennie's opinion the subject should be noted. JLL 8/1/70 WM14/1 321

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for dord Granville: consideration, that

it would be desirable to consult the Accountant of his Department, as well as Nr Rennie, the Auditn of the Colony, who appears to be in : this country, before evning to a

final decision on the subject.

I am,

Your

obedient Servant

Lo Allemetlen

1304 song lon

MINUTE PAPER.

Dr Zeur's

4.31/12

Ills. 27

The alterations which die

14304

R. Mac Dounsel has made appear tome to be decided improvements, and dam wote pware of any reason why the amoured form of Cotunate should not be adopted.

You will are that the Fissary suggests that wh. Rennie's opinion the subject should be noted.

JLL 8/1/70

WM14/1

321

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